heyy sonya i justt wantted to sayy thatt i think thatt this was and ok PSA. I would give you a 3.5 for research, 3 for design and form, 2.5 for voice cause i couldntt reallyy understand what you were saying, and the music was too loud, and lastlyy i would give you a 3.75 for presentation.
im the biggest rapper SNOOP DOG and ill shall judge yur rap well its good i think content was a 4 well met,design 4, tone was serious but 3,documentation 4audience was 4 cuz u caught my attention, overall presentation was cool. Rapping is the best homie,homie,homie from the south side. ok good night never mine bye
This PSA was so good... except for the fact that you went about 6 seconds over.
I give you a 4 for content because you had lots of facts, design becuase your hook brought me in, audience because even a little kid could understand what the message was, and tone because your tone was just right for the organization, but I'm gonna have to give you a 3 for presentation because you went over.
Great use of facts that over 16,000 wishes come true every 50 seconds---that's a lot of wishes! 4 points for design, audience (language suited for middle school age students), and serious tone since this is organization benefits ill youth. If music was toned down just a bit more, might have been easier to hear.
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heyy sonya i justt wantted to sayy thatt i think thatt this was and ok PSA. I would give you a 3.5 for research, 3 for design and form, 2.5 for voice cause i couldntt reallyy understand what you were saying, and the music was too loud, and lastlyy i would give you a 3.75 for presentation.
Good job sonya, me love you long time, keliane
im the biggest rapper SNOOP DOG and ill shall judge yur rap well its good i think content was a 4 well met,design 4, tone was serious but 3,documentation 4audience was 4 cuz u caught my attention, overall presentation was cool. Rapping is the best homie,homie,homie from the south side. ok good night never mine bye
This PSA was so good...
except for the fact that you went about 6 seconds over.
I give you a 4 for content because you had lots of facts, design becuase your hook brought me in, audience because even a little kid could understand what the message was, and tone because your tone was just right for the organization, but I'm gonna have to give you a 3 for presentation because you went over.
Sorry!!
with <3,
Rachel
Great use of facts that over 16,000 wishes come true every 50 seconds---that's a lot of wishes! 4 points for design, audience (language suited for middle school age students), and serious tone since this is organization benefits ill youth. If music was toned down just a bit more, might have been easier to hear.
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