What's your deal?? You stole the exact words that Kaisong's Story had!! Plus you had no music.
I have to give you a 3 for everything. Maybe a 2 for content. I admit that your voice was loud and clear but you can't just copy a video that world vision did and use it for a different organization.
ummmm guyys this sounds like you gott itt off like a storyy orr something cause itt reallyy doesntt sound like you. i think thatt you should gett a 3 for contentt, 4 for design and form, 3 for voice, and 3.5 for presentation. im so sorryy thatt i have to sayy thatt.
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Wow, very professionally sounding PSA! Great data and information which motivates to get involved and sponser a child. Consistent voice throughout!
What's your deal??
You stole the exact words that Kaisong's Story had!! Plus you had no music.
I have to give you a 3 for everything. Maybe a 2 for content. I admit that your voice was loud and clear but you can't just copy a video that world vision did and use it for a different organization.
with <3,
Rachel
ummmm guyys this sounds like you gott itt off like a storyy orr something cause itt reallyy doesntt sound like you. i think thatt you should gett a 3 for contentt, 4 for design and form, 3 for voice, and 3.5 for presentation. im so sorryy thatt i have to sayy thatt.
love you, keli
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